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[git-wiki.git] / pep-git.txt

diff --git a/pep-git.txt b/pep-git.txt
index f24d9e8d81cd896896a86a99c71990af794aa323..396cd40c3cc1951a3c923ff4dda13522e2427465 100644 (file)
--- a/pep-git.txt
+++ b/pep-git.txt
@@ -869,17 +869,18 @@ But a better tool, perhaps the best, is `git-remote-hg
 bidirectional access (pull and push) to Mercurial repositories from
 git. The author wrote a `comparison of alternatives
 <https://github.com/felipec/git/wiki/Comparison-of-git-remote-hg-alternatives>`_
-that seems to be objective.
+that seems to be mostly unbiased.
 
-To use git-remote-hg, install or clone it, add to your PATH and
+To use git-remote-hg, install or clone it, add to your PATH (or copy
+script ``git-remote-hg`` to a directory that's already in PATH) and
 prepend ``hg::`` to Mercurial URLs. For example::
 
     $ git clone https://github.com/felipec/git-remote-hg.git
     $ PATH=$PATH:"`pwd`"/git-remote-hg
     $ git clone hg::https://hg.python.org/peps/ PEPs
 
-To work with the repository just use normal ``git fetch/pull/push``
-commands.
+To work with the repository just use regular git commands including
+``git fetch/pull/push``.
 
 Mercurial for Git users https://mercurial.selenic.com/wiki/GitConcepts